Okay Writers, This Post is for YOU! Brendra Drake’s One Liner Contest

 


My writer buddy, Dustin, brought this contest to my attention today.
http://brenleedrake.blogspot.com/2011/01/blogfest-contest-with-prizes-from-agent.html
The idea:

Share the first line of your finished MS and get feedback. Polish it and enter it into the contest. The winner gets cool stuff, like a critique from Weronika Janczuk. How cool is that?

Here's the first line of my novel.  Please let me know what you think in the comments.


First Line:  Some refer to me as the fallen.

That's it folks!  My big first line.  Ha-ha.  So let me know your 2 cents below and wish me luck. 

~The Lemonista